josefin1234

Äldre 4 Apr 09:33

71 svar

Engelska b inlämning behöver hjälp ? snälla :)

Jag har inlämning idag på min engelska b kurs på komvux. Jag har ingen som kan rätta min text eller ens kolla över den . undrar om någon är sugen? jag är intresserad av stavfel grammatik fel. Lite överkoll bara så man förstår . Ok om ni tror det är ett godkänt ? tack alla gullungar

To kill someone who has murdered. capital punishment

I do not know how many people there are out there in the world who has murdered someone. or how many there is in prison and serving of his sentence. I do not know how many there are who sit and serve a punishment they did not commit. can me or you like an outsider say that capital punishment is the right thing to do? Is not the man who killed the murderer a murderer to?

Firsly i can say that im very happy we dont have capital punishment in sweden becuse i think it is wrong to say that one should not murder, and then you kill the murderer youself and after that we need a third person who can kill he who killed the killer?it would never stop. uhm? you heard how that sounds. violence and the death penalty solves nothing that im 100 procent shure about.

secondly its not helping the family. the family dosent feel better afterwards and the pain does not end even after the killer has been murdered. nothing can bring their family member back . maby its a comfort enof to now that the right person is behind bars and he will sit there fore a very long time.
i can think that capital punishment is a cind of nice judgement. i rather die than sit in a prison for 50 years and thats alsow why im against death Penalty. the prisoner should have it as bad as possible and death is quite nice when compared to prison

Thirdly, I read on the internet that an investigation had been made that capital punishment could scare people and cause them not to kill but it did apparently not. the capital punishment is legal does not scare people and they had remained the same with the death penalty, and not to forget the polis is very good on sulving crimes but they can have wrong and what happen if the wrong people get the punishment? i new it allredy happent and i will aigen.it's not fair that innocent people will die for another's crime.

in conclusion i would like to say aigen that crime solves nothing and I believe it is against human rights to murder. we should not continue to expose people to torture and degrading treatments. if a man kills, we as a country or city or union to stand strong against and not do the same themselves. The problem goes far back in history, we need not resolve the problems resulting from a court room when it's already too late. teach your children what is right and wrong and keep them off the streets. not everyone has the opportunity but if you will, and hope there's enough to spread a message on.

Josefin Johansson

TaSe

Äldre 4 Apr 10:53

#21

Jag läser eng b på KOMVUX nu och min lärare menar att vi "ska" använda I'm, don't osv. Vi ska på så sätt visa att vi är säkra på hur det ska användas.

Khaleesi

Äldre 4 Apr 10:54

#22

TaSe skrev 2012-04-04 10:53:09 följande:

Jag läser eng b på KOMVUX nu och min lärare menar att vi "ska" använda I'm, don't osv. Vi ska på så sätt visa att vi är säkra på hur det ska användas.

Är det bara jag som reagerar över att sådant kommer på Komvuxnivå? När jag gick i skolan så hörde det till mellanstadiegrunderna.

Dagens språktips - DE kan bytas ut mot VI, och DEM kan bytas ut mot OSS. Lycka till!

Lavish

Äldre 4 Apr 10:59

#23

Det är ganska mycket fel i texten, så jag tycker att du ska testa denna enkla metod som jag brukar använda:

För varje ord du inte är 100% säker på, prova att googla de första bokstäverna i ordet och google brukar ofta ge förslag på vilket ord det kan vara. Annars går du till ett traditionellt lexikon så får du orden rätt åtminstone.

Men jag får faktiskt ingen lust att sitta och rätta hela denna text, för om du själv VET att man sätter stor bokstav i början av meningen och inte brytt dig om att fixa till fel du själv ser och är medveten om innan du lägger ut texten här känns det som att man får göra mycket onödigt arbete åt dig.

josefin1234

Äldre 4 Apr 11:05

#24

Har rättat det nu och ser inga fler stavfel . förutom dosen´t ? stavas det så eller.

jag är enormt tacksam till alla som försökt hjälpa till.

pappapappa12 skrev 2012-04-04 10:36:23 följande:

Tredje stycket menar jag alltså det som börjar med "thirdly"

jag ska försöka andra det tredje stycket lite . för ju långsamare jag läser det ju mindre fattar jag vad jag skrivit.
tack!!

pappapappa12

Äldre 4 Apr 11:08

#25

josefin1234 skrev 2012-04-04 11:05:52 följande:

Har rättat det nu och ser inga fler stavfel . förutom dosen´t ? stavas det så eller.

jag är enormt tacksam till alla som försökt hjälpa till.

jag ska försöka andra det tredje stycket lite . för ju långsamare jag läser det ju mindre fattar jag vad jag skrivit.
tack!!

nej det stavas inte dosen't det stavas doesn't

does not -> doesn't

pappapappa12

Äldre 4 Apr 11:15

#26

josefin1234 skrev 2012-04-04 11:05:52 följande:

Har rättat det nu och ser inga fler stavfel . förutom dosen´t ? stavas det så eller.

jag är enormt tacksam till alla som försökt hjälpa till.

jag ska försöka andra det tredje stycket lite . för ju långsamare jag läser det ju mindre fattar jag vad jag skrivit.
tack!!

Lägg gärna ut den rättade texten =)

Lavish

Äldre 4 Apr 11:17

#27

Den här meningen t.ex:

i new it allredy happent and i will aigen.

Ska det stå "I know it has already happened and it will happen again" ?

Det går ju att förstå vad du vill säga i stort sett, men vissa meningar går bara att förstå för att man har fått sammanhanget av texten.

josefin1234

Äldre 4 Apr 11:19

#28

pappapappa12 skrev 2012-04-04 11:08:19 följande:

nej det stavas inte dosen't det stavas doesn't

does not -> doesn't

aha har du lust att kolla över det igen för att se skillnaden ?

To kill someone who has murdered. capital punishment

I don´t know how many people there are out there in the world who has murdered someone, or how many there is in prison and serving of his sentence. I do not know how many there are who sit and serve a punishment they did not commit. Can me or you like an outsider say that capital punishment is the right thing to do? Is not the man who killed the murderer a murderer to?

Firstly I can say that i´m very happy we don't have capital punishment in Sweden because I think it´s wrong to say that one should not murder, and then you kill the murderer yourself and after that we need a third person who can kill he who killed the killer?it would never stop. uhm? you heard how that sounds. violence and the death penalty solves nothing that's i´m 100 percent sure about.

Secondly it´s not helping the family. The family doesn't feel better afterwards and the pain does not end even after the killer has been murdered. nothing can bring their family member back . Maybe it´s a comfort enough to know that the right person are behind bars and he will sit there fore a very long time.
I can think that capital punishment is a kind of nice judgement. I rather die than sit in a prison for 50 years and that's also why i´m against death Penalty. the prisoner should have it as bad as possible and death is quite nice when compared to prison

Thirdly, I read on the internet that an investigation had been made that capital punishment could scare people and cause them not to kill, but it did apparently not. statistically oak shows that there is no difference between states that have capital punishment and those who don´t have it and not to forget the police are very good at solving crimes, but they can be wrong and what happens if the wrong people will be punished? I new it happen already and I will again.It 's not fair that innocent people will die for another's crimes.

In conclusion I would like to say again that crime solves nothing and I believe it´s against human rights to murder. We should not continue to expose people to torture and degrading treatments. If a man kills, we as a country or city or union to stand strong against and not do the same themselves. The problem goes far back in history, we need not resolve the problems resulting from a court room when it's already too late. teach your children what is right and wrong and keep them off the streets. Not everyone has the opportunity but if you will, and hope there's enough to spread a message on.

Josefin Johansson

pappapappa12

Äldre 4 Apr 11:26

#29

josefin1234 skrev 2012-04-04 11:19:18 följande:

aha har du lust att kolla över det igen för att se skillnaden ?

To kill someone who has murdered. capital punishment

I don´t know how many people there are out there in the world who has murdered someone, or how many there is in prison and serving of his sentence. I do not know how many there are who sit and serve a punishment they did not commit. Can me or you like an outsider say that capital punishment is the right thing to do? Is not the man who killed the murderer a murderer to?

Firstly I can say that i´m very happy we don't have capital punishment in Sweden because I think it´s wrong to say that one should not murder, and then you kill the murderer yourself and after that we need a third person who can kill he who killed the killer?it would never stop. uhm? you heard how that sounds. violence and the death penalty solves nothing that's i´m 100 percent sure about.

Secondly it´s not helping the family. The family doesn't feel better afterwards and the pain does not end even after the killer has been murdered. nothing can bring their family member back . Maybe it´s a comfort enough to know that the right person are behind bars and he will sit there fore a very long time.
I can think that capital punishment is a kind of nice judgement. I rather die than sit in a prison for 50 years and that's also why i´m against death Penalty. the prisoner should have it as bad as possible and death is quite nice when compared to prison

Thirdly, I read on the internet that an investigation had been made that capital punishment could scare people and cause them not to kill, but it did apparently not. statistically oak shows that there is no difference between states that have capital punishment and those who don´t have it and not to forget the police are very good at solving crimes, but they can be wrong and what happens if the wrong people will be punished? I new it happen already and I will again.It 's not fair that innocent people will die for another's crimes.

In conclusion I would like to say again that crime solves nothing and I believe it´s against human rights to murder. We should not continue to expose people to torture and degrading treatments. If a man kills, we as a country or city or union to stand strong against and not do the same themselves. The problem goes far back in history, we need not resolve the problems resulting from a court room when it's already too late. teach your children what is right and wrong and keep them off the streets. Not everyone has the opportunity but if you will, and hope there's enough to spread a message on.

Josefin Johansson

STOR BOKSTAV EFTER PUNKT!!!! Det är väldigt många ställen du glömmer det på.

I (jag) stavas i engelskan ALLTID med stor bokstav (I'm, inte i'm).

I övrigt är det lite bättre.

josefin1234

Äldre 4 Apr 11:31

#30

pappapappa12 skrev 2012-04-04 11:26:48 följande:

STOR BOKSTAV EFTER PUNKT!!!! Det är väldigt många ställen du glömmer det på.

I (jag) stavas i engelskan ALLTID med stor bokstav (I'm, inte i'm).

I övrigt är det lite bättre.

så nu är det fixat men det går att läsa och kanske är värt ett litet godkänt nu

Engelska b inlämning behöver hjälp ? snälla :)

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