Engelska b inlämning behöver hjälp ? snälla :)

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To kill someone who has murdered. capital punishment

I do not know how many people there are out there in the world who has murdered someone. or how many there is in prison and serving of his sentence. I do not know how many there are who sit and serve a punishment they did not commit. can me or you like an outsider say that capital punishment is the right thing to do? Is not the man who killed the murderer a murderer to?

Firsly i can say that im very happy we dont have capital punishment in sweden becuse i think it is wrong to say that one should not murder, and then you kill the murderer youself and after that we need a third person who can kill he who killed the killer?it would never stop. uhm? you heard how that sounds. violence and the death penalty solves nothing that im 100 procent shure about.

secondly its not helping the family. the family dosent feel better afterwards and the pain does not end even after the killer has been murdered. nothing can bring their family member back . maby its a comfort enof to now that the right person is behind bars and he will sit there fore a very long time.
i can think that capital punishment is a cind of nice judgement. i rather die than sit in a prison for 50 years and thats alsow why im against  death Penalty. the prisoner should have it as bad as possible and death is quite nice when compared to prison

Thirdly, I read on the internet that an investigation had been made that capital punishment could scare people and cause them not to kill but it did apparently not. the capital punishment is legal does not scare people and they had remained the same with the death penalty,  and not to forget the polis is very good on sulving crimes but they can have wrong and what happen if the wrong people get the punishment?  i new it allredy happent and i will aigen.it's not fair that innocent people will die for another's crime.

in conclusion i would like to say aigen that crime solves nothing and I believe it is against human rights to murder. we should not continue to expose people to torture and degrading treatments. if a man kills, we as a country or city or union to stand strong against and not do the same themselves. The problem goes far back in history, we need not resolve the problems resulting from a court room when it's already too late. teach your children what is right and wrong and keep them off the streets. not everyone has the opportunity but if you will, and hope there's enough to spread a message on.

Josefin Johansson