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Mina rättningar med stor bokstav...

To kill someone who has murdered. capital punishment

I don´t know how many people there are out there in the world who has murdered someone, or how many there is(ARE) in prison and serving of his sentence. I do not know how many there are who sit and serve a punishment they did not commit. Can me or you like an outsider say that capital punishment is the right thing to do? Is not the man who killed the murderer a murderer to?

Firstly I can say that i(I)´m very happy we don't have capital punishment in Sweden because I think it´s wrong to say that one should not murder, and then you kill the murderer yourself and after that we need a third person who can kill he who killed the killer?(MELLANSLAG OCH STOR BOKSTAV)it would never stop. uhm? y(STOR BOKSTAV)ou heard how that sounds. v(STOR BOKSTAV)iolence and the death penalty solves nothing that's(TA BORT) i(I)´m 100 percent sure about.

Secondly it´s not helping the family. The family doesn't feel better afterwards and the pain does not end even after the killer has been murdered. n(STOR BOKSTAV)othing can bring their family member back . Maybe it´s a comfort enough to know that the right person are(IS) behind bars and he will sit there fore a very long time.
I can think that capital punishment is a kind of nice judgement. I rather die than sit in a prison for 50 years and that's also why i(I)´m against  death P(p)enalty. t(STOR BOKSTAV)he prisoner should have it as bad as possible and death is quite nice when compared to prison(PUNKT HÄR)

Thirdly, I read on the internet that an investigation had been made that capital punishment could scare people and cause them not to kill, but it did apparently not. s(STOR BOKSTAV)tatistically oak(VAD MENAR DU MED OAK HÄR??) shows that there is no difference between states that have capital punishment and those who don´t have it and not to forget the police are very good at solving crimes, but they can be wrong and what happens if the wrong people will be punished? I new (know) it happen already and I will again.(MELLANSLAG HÄR)It 's not fair that innocent people will die for another's crimes.

In conclusion I would like to say again that crime solves nothing and I believe it´s against human rights to murder. We should not continue to expose people to torture and degrading treatments. If a man kills, we as a country or city or union to stand strong against and not do the same themselves. The problem goes far back in history, we need not resolve the problems resulting from a court room when it's already too late. t(STOR BOKSTAV)each your children what is right and wrong and keep them off the streets. Not everyone has the opportunity but if you will, and hope there's enough to spread a message on.

några saker...

I engelska säger man inte murdered angående någon som har mördat, utan man säger COMMITTED MURDER.
Murdered använder man om någon som har blivit mördad. Sen om du väljer att skriva do not, och sen don't, välj ETT, använd inte de båda olika.

To kill someone who has COMMITTED MURDER. 
Capital punishment.

I do not know how many people there are out there in the world who has commited murder,  or how many there are in prison and serving this sentence. I do not know how many there are who sit and serve a punishment they did not commit. Can you or me, as outsiders, say that capital punishment is the right thing to do? Is not the man who killed the murderer a murderer to?

First, I can say that I'm very happy that we don't have capital punishment in Sweden because I think it is wrong to say that one should not murder and then you kill the murderer yourself, and after that we need a third person who can kill the personwho killed the killer? It would never stop?  You heard how that sounds. Violence and death penalty solves nothing, that I'm 100 procent sure about.
 
Second,  it's not helping the family. The family doesn't feel better afterwards and the pain does not end even after the killer has been murdered. Nothing can bring their family member back. Maybe it's a comfort enough to know that the right person is behind bars and that he will sit there for a very long time.
I can think that capital punishment is a kind of nice judgement. I rather die than sit in a prison for 50 years and that is also why I'm against  death penalty. The prisoner should have it as bad as possible and death is nice when compared to prison

Third, I read on the internet that an investigation had been made that capital punishment could scare people and cause them not to kill but it did apparently not. That the capital punishment is legal does not scare people and they had remained the same with the death penalty,  Not to forget, the police is very good on solving crimes but they can make mistakes and what will happen if the wrong person gets the punishment?  I know it already happend, it's not fair that innocent people will die for another persons crime.

In conclusion I would like to say again that crime solves nothing and I believe it is against human rights to murder. We should not continue to expose people to torture and degrading treatments. If a man commits murder, we as a country, city or union must stand strong against and not do the same ourselves. The problem goes far back in history, we don't need to resolve the problems resulting from a court room when it's already too late. Teach your children what is right and wrong and keep them off the streets. Not everyone has the opportunity but if you will, and hope there's enough to spread a message on.

Nu har jag rättat din text. Om jag har missat ngt, ja,d å hoppas jag andra märker det =)

Oj ts. Skriv om. 

Mitt tips är att läsa om Engelska A. Förstår inte hur du tagit dej till B-kursen faktiskt.

Det är apostrof man använder när man skall skriva exempelvis I'm, inte accent som du gjort ts.

Sedan är dwt fortfarande is/are-fel i början bland annat. Men ja, ett G kan du kanske få.

Varför skriver ni alla "people who has committed murder"?

Typ i alla fall. People är plural och då är det "have" killed someone. Så det så.