Aniiee skrev 2017-05-20 21:04:20 följande:
OK, jag tycker FORTFARANDE att det här är bland det bästa jag skrivit. Jag har nog alldeles förlåga krav på mig själv.. (ursäkta formateringen, som jag bara förutsätter att FL kommer fucka up).
Before any of them could say or do anything more, a fairy popped up just in front of Irestor?s nose. It looked like a rather small, young woman, with long, gray hair and eyes, dressed in orange leaves, and she had wings. Wings like a butterfly, with the same shade of purple as Irestor?s eyes. And on her face she wore an expression of anger and glee mixed together.
?Irestor?, she cried out. ?You?re back! Where have you been, you haven?t been here for ages, not since I gave you those new boots! You haven?t even sent me a falcon since, you meanie! Oh, oh, oh, are those humans? I?ve never seen a human before. You never bring me any, meanie! Are those boys? Why are the human boys naked? Are human boys always naked? Why is the girl not naked? Is she a girl? I think she?s a girl? Why are they boys naked and not the girl? Don?t they know it?s already Slaktmathir? They?ll freeze to death! You should get them some clothes, you meanie! But you?re back, oh, I missed you, you big meanie!? And then she promptly hugged Irestor?s nose.
Elril felt out of breath just hearing her rattle of the harangue, and he didn?t catch half of it, but he was enthralled none the less. And Irestor actually laughed.
?I?ve missed you too, Tilja?, he said. ?And, yes, those are humans, but, no, the boys are not naked. They?re in their long shirts.?
The fairy Tilja fluttered passed Irestor on her purple wings and looked the four humans up and down, thoughtfully and critically. The she fluttered back in front of Irestors nose and said in a conspiratorial half-whisper:
?I think one of the boys? long shirts isn?t quite long enough. Ehm? Things are showing.?
Ganska bra. Men om det är riktigt bra vet man ju inte förrän man sett hela berättelsen.